You and a couple of your colleagues would like to participate in a work-related seminar. Write a letter to your colleague who is the person in charge of the seminar and ask for: Detailed information regarding the dates Program schedule Enquire about cost and possible discounts for groups

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Dear Tom, I learn that the group human resources department is organizing an employment law and regulations

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soon and the human resources department of our company is assisting with that. I want to volunteer three of my colleagues and myself to attend the

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, so there are totally four people joining.

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, I want to know the cost involved. I understand our holding company is not going to charge us for the

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but the function will be held in another city and

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there are costs like air tickets and hotel fees. I would

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like to know if there are any group discounts on booking the hotel if there are only four people (3 rooms) . If there isn't any group discount available, what are the dates of the

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available? I would love to separate the dates our colleagues attending if the cost doesn't vary too much as I don't want everybody in the department unreachable on a particular day.

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, I would appreciate

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you can send the detailed program schedule to me. Thank you for all your help in advance and I am looking forward to hearing from you. Regards, Alan

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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