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As well as making money,businesses have social responsibilities,Do you agree or dis agree?

#money #businesses #responsibilities #dis
In the modern era, business
play
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 a vital role in our society , which has a huge part in
country's
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the country's
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 economy so some responsibility up individuals to them. In my opinion , please statement is extremely right and they should be doing it.
First
 of all, they should sell healthier products , which do not harmful to the body. If
people
 have it , it will impact on them so that they are facing some bad diseases,
For example
 , the strong chemical was used by the many countries
last
 year
that is
 the reason , which decreases the health right in many countries.
as a result
, it
also
 obstructs economy.
Moreover
 , they must not advertise, which
has
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 include narcotic substances because
of
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people
 will be addicted to them.
consequently
, they become all as your as in the past.
furthermore
 , they should do some social work , what is
encourage
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people
 to do something , which
help
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to
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our society or Nations.
consequently
 , patriotism awakens in
people
's hearts. In my point of view , the industry must do some voluntary work , which is helpful to their particular nation
such
 as some businessman donate their property to the government during a corona pending
that is
 the reason the country was overcome rapidly at that time. In conclusion , the pursuit must take liability for their country ,
however
 , they are not able to give every month my point of view, whenever society needs help,
then
 there will come
first
 for
the
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help.
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