You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter: explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can start

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Dear Sir, I, Kuljeet Kaur, writing

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letter to you to express my regret to join my duty at the prescribed time. I want to inform you that I got appointed in

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firm for the post of an Accountant and asked to join the duty by coming Monday on the 28th of August. I was very keen to start my new work,

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, I am unable to join. Unfortunately, I met with an accident yesterday due to which I got a serious injury in my right leg. Physicians suggested complete bed rest for me for a while because I got a fracture in my leg.

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, due to the above-mentioned reason, I am unable to start my new job by the prescribed time.

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, it would be really commendable if you could please allow my absence from the 28th of August. I will definitely start my duty after 10 days i.e on the 8th of September.

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will be really helpful for me if you could permit me to do that. Looking forward to hearing a positive reply from your side. Thanks. Yours Sincerely, Kuljeet Kaur.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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9 paragraphs

186 words

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Some people argue that we should do research into their family history. Others, agree with the view that we should focus on the present and future generations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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