Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many believe that it is better for university
students
to
study
whatever they are interested
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others think they should not be allowed to choose
subjects
that have been chosen
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many
what
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subjects
that will be beneficial and useful in the future like science and technology. in the following
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I will examine both views and
also
I will give my opinion with suitable reasons. On the one hand, if
students
study
a topic which is interesting
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them they are more likely to become professional in that field in comparison to those who pick that subject by Force.
moreover
,
students
are aware of their feelings, talents and interests more than anyone else so there is no denying
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the fact that they know in which field they can improve the most.
On the other hand
, in some countries the majority of university
students
choose the same subject because of different reasons
such
as their talents ,their interests or even because of good job opportunities and high salaries while it is not good for the country because after a short period unemployment percentage will increase and some fields will experience lack of worker.
for instance
,in Iran most
students
choose to
study
medicine while there are lots of unemployed doctors and nurses in Iran.
therefore
if
students
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allowed to choose whatever they want is not so beneficial.So government out to set exams for popular
subjects
in order to recognise those who are qualified and talented for the field. In conclusion ,if a student
be
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forced to
study
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a subject
he might lose his passion. so government should attract
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attention to the
subjects
that are beneficial for the country by advertising and by setting easy conditions for accepting
students
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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