Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Other believe that there are health benefits of living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
Many
people
believe that living in the countryside
is a benefit for people
to get a healthy lifestyle, others suppose that it has most positive aspects for people
wholiving
in cities. Correct your spelling
who living
This
essay will analyse both sides of this
view to clarify conclusion
.
On the one hand, it is easy for Correct article usage
the conclusion
people
to create a healthy lifestyle when living in the countryside
, such
as improving mental health and reducing stress. Moreover
, rural
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the rural
area
can Fix the agreement mistake
areas
havest
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have
harvest
food
and healthy food
from nature. For example
, people
who is
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are
farmer
is suitable Add an article
a farmer
to
living in Change preposition
for
countryside
, they can bring Add an article
the countryside
there
healthy Correct your spelling
their
food
source for
cities to Change preposition
to
sold
them for Change the form of the verb
sell
better
life. It can be seen that rural area was a palace for Add an article
a better
people
who need to have a healthy food
source from nature and not from chemical products sold in the supermaraket
. Correct your spelling
supermarket
In addition
, living in countryside
is Add an article
the countryside
suitable
environment Add an article
a suitable
to
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for
people
work productivity Change noun form
people's
is improves
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is improved
is improving
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due
duce
to reducing
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due
On the other hand
, in spite of some natural advantages in the countryside
, city life is able to enhance people
health effectively. Change noun form
people's
For instance
, the COVID-19 pandemic is a concern for the whole world, so people
always need a medical care service, which in
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on
thecountryside
is not available at the present time. It can be seen that living in the urban Correct your spelling
the countryside
the country side
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area
are
arer
is an opportunity to help Correct your spelling
area
people
easier to approach high quality
medical care.
In conclusion, Add a hyphen
high-quality
authogh
the Correct your spelling
although
countryside
will help people
live in the environment with fresh air and endless source of food
from farming, city
will bring more good condition for Add an article
the city
people
to improve their mental and physical state.Submitted by thaothanh1323 on
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