you have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other you don't fully agree with this opinion. write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers Offered to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir or Madam,  I am writing to inform you that I partially agree with the article on how the country's
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centres look similar to one another. 
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of all, I would like to start with some of the points that
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agree with in the article. It is true that the shape of the
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centre
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is similar.
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is because they all are rectangular in design.
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, I agree with another point that they are similar in colour as they are all painted in white. 
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, I would like to explain that the
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centre
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in my area is unique compared to those in others.
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with, the
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centre
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in my area is larger in size, it has a square foot of 3000 which is twice that of in other areas.
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, the material used in the
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is of good quality compared to those in other locations. I would like to invite you for a guided tour of my
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. There are beautiful scenery and exotic shops.
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, you would be able to see how the
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in my
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is different to those in others.  Thank you for your consideration,  Sincerely,  Imtiaz Chowdhury
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • I am writing in response to
  • the article published in your newspaper
  • I would like to express my disagreement with
  • the claim made in the article that
  • I agree with some points raised in the article
  • However, I believe that there are significant differences in my town center
  • One notable difference is
  • Another way in which my town center stands out is
  • Furthermore,
  • In addition to
  • I would be more than happy to offer
  • a guided tour of my town
  • to the writer of the article
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