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Some people like to try new things. for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing something they are familiar with. Discuss both attitudes and give your own opinion.

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A lot of
people
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 are enthusiastic about new
experiences
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 as visiting new tourist attraction locations and eating different food, while
on the contrary
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 side, others prefer to do something which they are familiar with. I,
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 many public, am keen, am keen on novel
experiences
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. In
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 essay, I will discuss both aspects. Having routine days and weeks during a month, not only do human beings have a safe life but
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 is suitable for conservative
people
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. As a vivid example, an employee who has a daily fixed task to do neither has to think about the task nor make a decision. So there would be less responsibility in comparison with whom have to make a decision.
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, those
people
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 who are not eager on testing new food thought " tested food which is delicacy is much safer than the new one and they would not sick by eating them".
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, there are many
people
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 who enjoy trying new things
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 as places to visit, and having a new meal. there are some researches in the same field which reveal the relationship between the type of personality and occupations. Most
people
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 who like to have new
experiences
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 in a vast range of tasks do not like a routine career. While they do not like daily tasks, they are successful in occupations which need creativity and decision-making. To conclude, while conservative
people
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 do not enthusiastic about new
experiences
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, others enjoy having new
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.
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 to some research, conservatives have no problem with routine jobs as well as eating repetitive products.
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, others like to do something new and they are successful in creative tasks and can make better decisions
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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