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Government should spend more money on education than on recreation and sports. Do you agree or disagree?

#government #money #education #recreation #sports
Nowadays,
education
 is a basic building block of a nation. It is
a
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 single best investment countries can make to develop a healthy, prosperous and equitable society.
Therefore
, I firmly believe that the government should invest a higher proportion of money to improve the quality of
education
.
Education
 plays a very vital role in
this
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fast paced
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 world. It is a core building block that helps any civilization to compete with other developing countries of the world. The more you invest in the
education
 of the society, the more it becomes beneficial
in
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broader
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 perspective. Literate people
helps
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help
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 in improving the economy and making
such
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policies that can somehow mitigate the issues faced by the general public by utilizing their knowledge. Germany,
For instance
, invested an enormous amount of money
on
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education
 after the
Second
 World War. After being completely demolished, Germany is the fastest growing country in the field of Information Technology in
this
 present era.
Education
 is a powerful weapon that wipes out poverty, corruption, unemployment, recidivism and illiteracy. It teaches us basic manners, ethics, and other skills
such
 as management, teamwork,
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communication. These things are the key aspect of an individual to become a good human being who can serve his/her nation for a very long period of time.
Education
 is worth investing
because
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 the amount of money the government invests
on
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 the youth will pay them off later in the future when these young aspects become
policy makers
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policymakers
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 and take decisions for the betterment of the country.
As a result
, the government officials,
therefore
, should craft
such
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policies that help in mitigating the rate of illiteracy
from
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 society and elevate the standard and quality of
education
 in order to get a favourable outcome for the growth of the country.
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