In most countries, multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important. This tread is seriously damaging our quality of life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, international firms and their product has become more significant than ever in lots of lands. It is thought

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our quality of life.

Therefore

, I would argue that

this

tendency both for local producers

as well as

those who consume

this

product will highly likely affect negatively.

Firstly

, increasing demand for international

products

will decrease the needs of

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local firms.

In other words

, if domestic fruits can not be sold , local workers will become poor and

then

will need aid from the local authorities. Local farmers,

for instance

, who grow natural

products

will stop growing them which are an invaluable source of our healthy diet.

Hence

, international businesses are an utterly negative trend for both local producers and people who consume their

products

.

Secondly

, in terms of safety, most imports can not be controlled effectively.

That is

to say, most

products

which come from overseas without any check,whether the quality or the quantity can come easily to our shelves. China can be a good example where their

products

are sold hugely all around the world ,

however

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there is no authority controlling their product properly.

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,

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awareness should be focused on control mechanisms in order to have a better

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life. In conclusion, it seems to me that I completely agree with

this

statement of harming our life by international commercing. In spite of globalisation, we are facing a huge threat which is generated by global

products

and

this

movement is either to consumer or local commerce can be threatened.