Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people suppose that

manufactures

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manufacturers

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and supermarkets have the duty to reduce the

amount

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of packaging of

goods

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. Others state that customers should avoid buying

goods

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with excessive packaging. Considering the situation that now

we

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apply

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all countries, societies, and people are under the environmental issues

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as climate change and the lack of resources, the writer of

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essay

think

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both parties have responsibilities for

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matter. If producers and sellers try to cut

on with

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the

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amount

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number

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of plastics, the impact of the

over wrapping

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over-wrapping

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problem is tremendous. Because, every year, tons of packed

goods

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are produced all over the world.

Beside

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, even if

consumers

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do not care about

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matter and continue buying too

much

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packed products, the goal to reduce the

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amount

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number

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of packaging

goods

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can be achieved. While

consumers

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have

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a massive power to contribute to

reduce

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reducing

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the usage of plastics which are used for packaging. Because

,

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apply

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purchase tendencies

effect

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affect

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on

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apply

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the market. If people choose less packed items more and more, companies have no choice

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but to

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shift to the more popular style. In fact, as our attention focus on more eco-friendly business, green companies are getting popular in the stock market. Taking into account of above opinions, each

sectors

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have

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an important role to reduce the

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amount

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number

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of packaging

goods

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. Even though

manufactures

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manufacturers

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and supermarkets have slightly more responsibilities than

consumers

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, their concerns about

packaging

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the packaging

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problem

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problems

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are essential to

change

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changing

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producers

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producers'

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attitude

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. In conclusion, when it comes to

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apply

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responsibility, producers and sellers have more of it. Though, To sort out

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this

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issues,

consumers

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are

also

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crucial.