Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The given pie chart below depicts the average proportion of 3 sorts of nutrients, which will be really detrimental to our physical health if it is intaken too much.
According to The New York Times, which shows the daily increase in
American
weight, one can see many reliable pieces of evidence for consuming more sugar in American
meals, which takes up the highest percentage (42% in snacks). There is a point that we can not stop losing weight if we are addicted to snacks. Gradually, the American
's body will be in some unusual conditions related to obesity. Another nutrient is saturated fat also
causes obesity similar to sugar proportion. Casually, that kind of fat accounts for approximately 37% of dinner. The ultimate nutrient is odium which is consumed at the top peak of the proportion (43%). I believe that in every meal people usually cook and add a little salt to their meals. However
, if we are overusing much sodium (salt), we actually get a heart attack and feel dizzy then
. Therefore
, American
meals should be meticulously/carefully prepared with a moderate amount of different ingredients presented by researchers.
Taking everything into consideration, American
overuse any kind of nutrient at a high level. Eating organic food and seasonal fruits can bring a better life.Submitted by jakelong16091994 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite