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What are some of the reasons for women to get married before graduation and provide their effects ?

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 but obliged on earth. People provide their own justifications as to whether they should tie the wedding knot before completing university.
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, the decision to settle down would have its own consequences. In
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 conjugal bonds would be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs. There is a plethora of motives to get married before completing graduation
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 as, if they find their better half at an earlier stage of
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 they can see the future ahead together.
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, women have the right to marry after they attain the age of maturity
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, that could be at any stage.
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, according to Special Marriage Act, in India women can marry after attaining the age of 18 years. How can anyone even object to a civil union at the eligible stage of their
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? The consequences of these nuptials would end up in liberal healthy off-springs. To elaborate, the younger the mother would be, the better will be the child as there would be fewer complications while giving birth.
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, if the mother is bearing a child in her late 20s, the chances of a healthy progeny are low as per medical science. Indeed, after the delivery ladies can even start up their careers as they are too young and boomy. In conclusion, when a woman wants to get married early in her
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 it would not only make her financially sound but will
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