People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

According to some , when a person moves to a new nation, they should accept its
traditions
and
customs
. I entirely agree with
this
view. There are some reasons why we should adopt the
customs
and
traditions
of the new
country
.
Firstly
, it helps people get used to the new living environment will be easier and more quickly .
Secondly
, each
country
has its
customs
and
traditions
, newcomers must learn and accept them to overcome cultural barriers. If they don'
t
do that, they probably won'
t
be able to stay there any longer.
In addition
, if you don'
t
know anything about the nation where you live, you may break the rules by chance.
For example
, in Australia, everyone drives on the left. You can be traffic
violations
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if you don'
t
know
this
information.
Moreover
, we can get some benefits
such
as
:
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When going to a new
country
, we will easily be isolated by society. But if we know, follow, and respect
this
country
's
customs
and
traditions
, we can get to know and bond with the citizens of that
country
more simply. And it will be difficult for us to have a new job unless we follow that
country
's
traditions
and
customs
. In conclusion, learning and following the
customs
and
traditions
of the other
country
doesn'
t
mean losing the
customs
and
traditions
of our own
country
, but it helps us in many aspects and makes us widely understand other countries in the world.
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