People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is advisable that you follow a

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country's

coutry ’s

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country’s

culture

when you move to a foreign

country

. In my opinion, I strongly believe that obeying foreign

customs

and

traditions

in a

country

is absolutely needed. There are a handful of reasons why you should obey a

country

’s

customs

and

traditions

.

Firstly

, when following a foreign land’s

culture

, you will be seen as respectful because that means you have done

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and

learn

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learned

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about the

country

before living in it,

that

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and that

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you are actually interested in it.

Secondly

,

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into a

country

’s cultural

act

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will give you knowledge.

For instance

, you don’t fully understand what

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the Tet

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holiday is until you go to Vietnam or other Asian countries to experience it.

Finally

, following a land’s

customs

and

traditions

helps you fit in with the locals. When you follow a

culture

, the locals think that you respect their

country

, and will gradually accept you, so that you won’t feel lonely when staying

at

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a foreign place.

On the other hand

, not following a custom or tradition is not appropriate for a number of reasons.

This

makes you seem like a disrespectful person, that you dislike these actions and you refuse to participate in it as it seems like you move to a

country

despite knowing nothing about it.

In addition

, the local people will find it hard to accept you, because you aren’t showing any respect from their perspective.

Furthermore

, there is no point in living in a new

country

if you don’t plan to learn anything new. The point of

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travelling

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and staying somewhere new is to know more about the world, yet you neglect the

country

’s

culture

, which is the whole core of the knowledge.

This

is bound to cause you great difficulty if you want to study about the

country

. If you don’t want to learn about its

culture

,

then

basically you are not learning anything at all. In conclusion, when living in a new

country

, you should follow its

customs

and

traditions

to learn more about its

culture

.