Discuss about the person you don’t like and the reasons why you detest that person. Also, name 3 virtues of that person

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and
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points, and for me,
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character I dislike
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.
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characters I prefer
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honest
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and
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and
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. In
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with someone I dealt with him
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, but
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, I believe that most
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who always lied to me and didn't stick to what he said.
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our friendship, and I didn't want to break up with him because we
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each other since
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book that he borrowed from me
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On the other hand
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he has
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like loyalty and sincerity.
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, he try to help other people
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afford
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remembered
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remember
he still
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me to pass my exam and he
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me whole
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he had
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • detest
  • aversion
  • characteristics
  • redeemable attributes
  • personal bias
  • professional demeanor
  • interpersonal relations
  • solidified opinion
  • negative impact
  • manage emotions
  • acknowledge virtues
  • redeeming qualities
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