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Smoking is a habit that claims many lives and is a great drain on health service. One way to combat smoking would be to make it illegal. What are the pros and cons of such a government policy? What alternative strategies can you suggest to combat smoking?

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Intake of
Tobacco
 is
one
 of the highest
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 of addiction in almost 90%
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of individual
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individual
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individuals
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 worldwide. The whole
of
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respiratory
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 system gets immunocompromised and
end
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ends
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 up with various infections including pneumonia.
Hence
,it can be completely terminated from regulatory bodies worldwide. Keeping all
sort
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 of
risk
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risks
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 and
benefit
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benefits
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,
one
 must think of the future generation and must stop themselves.
however
 certain methods can be implemented to diminish smoking. On the
one
 hand,
tobacco
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the tobacco
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 industry is
one
 largest growing
business
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businesses
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 worldwide with more than 50% of
profit
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the profit
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 directly earned by our
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government
goverment
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government
 through tax.
This
 situation has arrived due to
increseae
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increase
increased
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mordern
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modern
 lifestyle.Statistically,Women
takes
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take
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 50%
of
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 entire
tobacco
 consumption.It is exactly equal to the
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men's
means
mens
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 count of intake.
On the other hand
,the gradual surge of smoking is leading to
cause
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the cause
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 of several deadly diseases.
For example
,a pregnant woman gives birth to an abnormal foetus if she takes up smoke during her gestation period.It is highly teratogenic.
Additionally
,a man gets highly dependent on
this
 addiction and over-consumption leads to chronic obstructive pulmonary illness. Smoking is responsible for all possible critical diseases with higher mortality risks.Passive smoking is much more harmful than
the
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active smoking.
As a result
,both
smoker
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smokers
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 and
non-smoker
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non-smokers
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group
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 are getting
effected
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affected
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 by
tobacco
 intake.To completely terminate
such
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a situation
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situation
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situations
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,newer policies must be proposed and strict rules must be incorporated in public places.
For example
,In
kolkata
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Kolkata
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,mostly all architectural buildings and historical monuments
doesnot
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does not
doesn't
 all smoking inside their
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premises
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premisses
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premises
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.
Therefore
, keeping all money-making beneficiary options in mind,all official regulatory legal norms should be made against smoking.The awareness to minimalize smoking must be
practiced
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 to reduce
risk
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the risk
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 of passive smoking to the vulnerable non-smoking population.
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