Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choice on everyday matters such as food, cloths and entertainment is likely likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their wishes, other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both views and giv

e your opinion. In recent times,

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of individuals have different views on matters that

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to do with a

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in

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society, most people feel it is better to allow,

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to choose, the type

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of food

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,

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clothes

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and entertainment they desire.

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, some other

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of the opinion that, it is better the

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them make

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decision

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. Both parties have their reasons for the argument. In my own point of view, I think,

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should be involved in all aspects of their

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children

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life

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, especially when it has to do with

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.

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essay will elaborate more on both views.

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with, one of the importance of allowing a

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to make a decision is, that it helps to build

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and esteem.

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, the

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feels loved and accepted by his/ her

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. More so, it helps to reduce the feeling of being controlled all the time, it

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gives them the understanding that their opinion counts in the house.

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in school, teachers

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to build

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self confidence

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by allowing them

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what they would like to be in future, thereby creating a rapport between

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and the teacher.

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, there are severe complications associated with allowing

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to choose the type of meal, fashion and especially entertainment,

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as movies,

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and music

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. Entertainment can positively and negatively

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child

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way of life, it is the role of

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to protect their

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from

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and direct them

accordingly

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.

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, there are several corrupt movies meant for adults and some of the music videos with naked people, allowing a

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to gain access to

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, can corrupt the

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’s mind while growing. He or she might not see it as a problem

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and can start to imitate what they exhibiting. In conclusion, certainly, there are some merits

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allowing a

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make

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decisions during their development stage. It is

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, of

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great importance to guide them according to morals and norms guiding the society.