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Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right or wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #teachers #students #judge #right #subjects
Teaching
students
 what is right and wrong by
teachers
 may have different effects on different groups. I'll discuss it from my personal
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prospective
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. For the
parents
 who don'
t
 have the time to educate their
children
,
this
 would be a good thing, for they don'
t
 need to take the
responsibilities
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 to educate the
children
 on moral values. For the
teachers
 and schools,
however
,
they
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may take a
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heavier
heavior
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heavy
 burden on their
shoulder
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.
On the other hand
, For the administrators, it would help them to unify the social
ethical
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and ethical
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 standards, so they would support
this thoughts
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. And
for
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the
students
,
they
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may miss out
the
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 chance to learn from
mistakes
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their mistakes
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, since they already
be
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 taught what is right and wrong by the
teachers
. According to the above statements, the
teachers
 and
students
 may argue that only academic subjects should be taught in the school.
This
 opinion's
philosophy
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 base is that there is not a fixed moral standard that can
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applied
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appled
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apply
 to everything. Something
seems
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 as a fault may
be contributes
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on
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 other aspects.
For example
, generally speaking, fighting with others
are
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 wrong, but if you have been bullied for a long time
in
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the
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campus, and it didn'
t
 stop even after you told the
teachers
, should you continuously keep
silence
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 and be violated? Personally, I think it's the
parents
' responsibility, rather than the
teachers
', to teach the
children
 right and wrong. Based on the example I just took, I don'
t
 think the
teachers
 should take
responsibilities
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 fully for the campus bully. The main reason is the young peers'
behavior
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 has been impacted more significantly by the
parents
, rather than the teacher. Psychologically,
a
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children
grow
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 up in a
violate
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 family would
more
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 likely to behave
violately
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violently
 than other
children
. Maybe the teacher can teach the rules and laws to the
students
, but they can'
t
 control the
students
 to obey
it
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.
Thus
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is
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 seems more useful for
teachers
 to teach academic subjects than moral rules, as the
parents
 may lack
of
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special
knowledgements
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acknowledgements
acknowledgement
 to teach academically.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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