Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right or wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Teaching

students

what is right and wrong by

teachers

may have different effects on different groups. I'll discuss it from my personal

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prospective

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. For the

parents

who don'

have the time to educate their

children

this

would be a good thing, for they don'

need to take the

responsibilities

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to educate the

children

on moral values. For the

teachers

and schools,

however

they

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may take a

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heavier

heavior

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heavy

burden on their

shoulder

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On the other hand

, For the administrators, it would help them to unify the social

ethical

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and ethical

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standards, so they would support

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for

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the

students

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may miss out

the

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chance to learn from

mistakes

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, since they already

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taught what is right and wrong by the

teachers

. According to the above statements, the

teachers

and

students

may argue that only academic subjects should be taught in the school.

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opinion's

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base is that there is not a fixed moral standard that can

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appled

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to everything. Something

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as a fault may

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other aspects.

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, generally speaking, fighting with others

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wrong, but if you have been bullied for a long time

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campus, and it didn'

stop even after you told the

teachers

, should you continuously keep

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and be violated? Personally, I think it's the

parents

' responsibility, rather than the

teachers

', to teach the

children

right and wrong. Based on the example I just took, I don'

think the

teachers

should take

responsibilities

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fully for the campus bully. The main reason is the young peers'

behavior

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has been impacted more significantly by the

parents

, rather than the teacher. Psychologically,

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children

grow

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up in a

violate

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family would

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likely to behave

violately

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violently

than other

children

. Maybe the teacher can teach the rules and laws to the

students

, but they can'

control the

students

to obey

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seems more useful for

teachers

to teach academic subjects than moral rules, as the

parents

may lack

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special

knowledgements

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acknowledgements

acknowledgement

to teach academically.

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Prediction or recommendation

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Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right or wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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