Some people think that teacher should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Teaching
students
what is right and wrong by
teachers
may have different effects on different groups. I'll discuss it from my personal view. For the
parents
who don'
t
have the time to educate their
children
,
this
would be a good thing, for they don'
t
need to take the responsibility to educate the
children
on moral values. For the
teachers
and schools,
however
,
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may take a heavier burden on their shoulders.
On the other hand
, For the administrators, it would help them to unify the social
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standards, so they would support
this
thought. And
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the
students
,
they
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may miss out
chances
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to learn from their mistakes, since they have already been taught what is right and wrong by the
teachers
. According to the above statements, the schools and
students
may argue that only academic subjects should be taught in the school.
This
opinion's philosophical base is that there is
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fixed moral standard that can be applied to everything. Something that seems
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a fault may
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to other aspects.
For example
, generally speaking, fighting with others is wrong, but if you have been bullied for a long time on campus, and it didn'
t
stop even after you told the
teachers
, should you continuously keep silent and be violated? Personally, I think it's the
parents
' responsibility, rather than the
teachers
', to teach the
children
right and wrong. Based on the example I just took, I don'
t
think the
teachers
should take responsibility fully for the campus bully. The main reason is the young peers' behaviour has been impacted more significantly by the
parents
, rather than the teacher. Psychologically,
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children
who grow up in a
violating
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family would be more likely to behave violently than other
children
. Maybe the teacher can teach the rules and laws to the
students
, but they can'
t
control the
students
to obey
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. To conclude, it seems more useful for
teachers
to teach academic subjects than moral rules, as the
parents
may lack
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special
knowledgements
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acknowledgements
acknowledgement
to teach academically.
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  • ethical development
  • moral compass
  • character building
  • values and principles
  • curriculum
  • academic knowledge
  • subject expertise
  • pedagogical approach
  • value education
  • moral dilemmas
  • social responsibility
  • behavioral norms
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