While international tourism offers many advantages a lot of places, it brings about several disastrous effects on both people and environment there. Do the advantages of international touriIsm outweigh the disadvantages?
with the development of traffic technology,
passenger'
convenience and effectively shorten time have gradually been enhanced so that the rate of international Fix the agreement mistake
passengers'
tourism
has been increasing at
just a few years. there are both merits and demerits to Change preposition
in
tourism
. However
, I think that the demerits are more huge than the merits.
First
of all, I partly agree that international tourism
offers the most attractive place with many financial benefits as most the tourists are from developed countries so that they consume so much property during travelling. Furthermore
, the aerial industry can sharply thrive as tourists usually utilise the aeroplane to transport from their countries to the department. For example
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large number of Correct article usage
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people
who may enjoy their vacation.
However
, there also
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are also
national
by national. it causes several detrimental consequences. Change the adjective
nationally
Firstly
, it has too much contact between national. For example
, with the advent of the
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people
endeavour to overcome this
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people
who were infected transported
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were transported
that
the situation was sharply worsening. Correct word choice
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follwing
environment, Correct your spelling
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the
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airplanes
did not operate so many unemployees emerged. Change the spelling
aeroplanes
In addition
, endangered animals suffer from the rubbish issue which people
produce. the amount of trash is gradually increasing year by year as tourists do not concern about animals' habitat
. travellers collaborate Fix the agreement mistake
habitats
the
extinction of rare animals with the vice company.
In conclusion, Change preposition
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although
tourism
has a variety of financial effects I think that people
should not have free access to passage other
countries. We should enhance our law and abide by itChange preposition
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