Due to so many young people dropping out from schools, the rate of unemployment is increasing and it affects our society in different ways. In your opinion, how this can be improved?

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present days the number of youngsters quitting their educational program at the department is getting being raised.

Consequently

,

this

affects the community to a high extent

such

as an expansion of an unoccupied society. In my ,opinion

this

kind of situation can be solved by giving motivation to admission by enrolling them to free exam preparation classes and courses along with assuring the provident of an interesting social movement for all enlistment during their syllabus.

Firstly

,

subjects

taught in the academy are often boring and many

studies

are not so crucial for their

future

lives, so courses and

subjects

which are helpful for their

future

college acceptance should be conducted.

For instance

, if someone wants to be a doctor , he or she should already start taking medicine-oriented

subjects

such

as chemistry, and biology on a frequent basis even totally all the

study

period.

This

will give people transparent imagination and confidence for their prospective pre-entry exams to their preferable major degrees.

Therefore

, boring and extra out of their interesting educational program would not challenge them to

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from their institute.

Secondly

, most of the

students

at

schools

are forced only to

study

hard by receiving excess pressure either from their parents or teachers,

however

,

this

can be eliminated if social activities are organised at their

school

places.

For example

, when I had been studying at high

school

, our director often organised social events and varied sports, musicals, barbecue activities and even a disco every Saturday.

Moreover

, parties are welcomed in our

school

life as long as a student's

study

performance is good enough. These factors would definitely boost the eagerness of the population to

study

and complete their

studies

at their

schools

.

Thus

,

students

will go to their

schools

excited and with enthusiasm because life-

study

balance is crucial for advanced performance at

school

.  To sum up, boredom at

school

is getting to be a real problem, while the majority of

students

are dropping out of their

school

studies

. So, introducing new policies

such

as teaching

future

major focused

subjects

for passing entry exams to college or universities

instead

of taking boring not needed for

future

lives classes and providing social life

such

as interesting sports events and competitions along with disco and parties will motivate persons not to stop their

studies

at

schools

. If

students

go to

school

knowing that it is an interesting place to

study

useful and needed courses and having involved in social activities with their classmates , nobody will stop studying at their

study

places.