Due to so many young people dropping out from schools, the rate of unemployment is increasing and it affects our society in different ways. In your opinion, how this can be improved?

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present days the number of youngsters quitting their educational program at the department is getting being raised.

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affects the community to a high extent

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as an expansion of an unoccupied society. In my ,opinion

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kind of situation can be solved by giving motivation to admission by enrolling them to free exam preparation classes and courses along with assuring the provident of an interesting social movement for all enlistment during their syllabus.

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taught in the academy are often boring and many

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are not so crucial for their

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lives, so courses and

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which are helpful for their

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college acceptance should be conducted.

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, if someone wants to be a doctor , he or she should already start taking medicine-oriented

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as chemistry, and biology on a frequent basis even totally all the

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period.

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will give people transparent imagination and confidence for their prospective pre-entry exams to their preferable major degrees.

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, boring and extra out of their interesting educational program would not challenge them to

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from their institute.

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, most of the

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are forced only to

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hard by receiving excess pressure either from their parents or teachers,

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can be eliminated if social activities are organised at their

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places.

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, when I had been studying at high

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, our director often organised social events and varied sports, musicals, barbecue activities and even a disco every Saturday.

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, parties are welcomed in our

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life as long as a student's

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performance is good enough. These factors would definitely boost the eagerness of the population to

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and complete their

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at their

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.

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will go to their

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excited and with enthusiasm because life-

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balance is crucial for advanced performance at

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.  To sum up, boredom at

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is getting to be a real problem, while the majority of

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are dropping out of their

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studies

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. So, introducing new policies

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as teaching

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major focused

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for passing entry exams to college or universities

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of taking boring not needed for

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lives classes and providing social life

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as interesting sports events and competitions along with disco and parties will motivate persons not to stop their

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at

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. If

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go to

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knowing that it is an interesting place to

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useful and needed courses and having involved in social activities with their classmates , nobody will stop studying at their

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places.