Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
In
this
life we cannot always be happy, sometimes we have to go through the
obstacle as well in our journey. Few people say that we should accept Correct article usage
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the
bad Correct article usage
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circumstances
it is a part of our lives, Whereas others contend that we should give our everything to attain our wishes rather than sit back and worrying
about the situation. Wrong verb form
worry
This
essay discusses both perspectives and why i
believe that the arguments for seeking Change the capitalization
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solutions
are stronger.
There are two main reasons why people believe that we must be accepting of bad
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a bad
predicament
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predicaments
First
of all
we often cannot avoid Add a comma
,all
the
bad situation. Since these situations cannot always be avoided it is Correct article usage
a
best
way to accept Change the article
the best
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reality. Correct article usage
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For instance
, economic downturns can lead to the company we work for going bankrupt and in this
case, we should not feel hard done if we loss
our job. Replace the word
lose
Secondly
, unnecessary can be caused by dwelling on our current circumstances
. If we are accepting of our circumstances
this
can allow us to be in a positive mood and to continue enjoying our life despite a
setback.
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However
other
argue that we should have Correct pronoun usage
others
the
proactive mindset and find Correct article usage
a
solutions
to any negative situation. This
approach help
us to be in a positive mood which will motivate us to find Change the verb form
helps
For instance
, if we lose our job we should focus on finding a new job to solve the problem of being unemployed. Additionally
, focusing on solutions
can divert some of our negative emotions such
as a feeling of bad luck or guilt into more positive emotions such
as feelings of empowerment in our ability to solve our problems.
In conclusion, I believe both sides of the argument have merits. However
, I believe it’s better to focus on finding solutions
because it increases the likelihood of solving our problems and maintaining a positive mental attitude, which is far more important than the benefits of avoiding stress through being accepting of our circumstances
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