Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

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life we cannot always be happy, sometimes we have to go through
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obstacle as well in our journey. Few people say that we should accept
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bad
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it is a part of our lives, Whereas others contend that we should give our everything to attain our wishes rather than sit back and
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about the situation.
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essay discusses both perspectives and why
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believe that the arguments for seeking
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are stronger. There are two main reasons why people believe that we must be accepting of
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we often cannot avoid
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bad situation. Since these situations cannot always be avoided it is
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way to accept
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reality.
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, economic downturns can lead to the company we work for going bankrupt and in
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case, we should not feel hard done if we
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our job.
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, unnecessary can be caused by dwelling on our current
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. If we are accepting of our
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can allow us to be in a positive mood and to continue enjoying our life despite
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setback.
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argue that we should have
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proactive mindset and find
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to any negative situation.
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approach
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us to be in a positive mood which will motivate us to find
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, if we lose our job we should focus on finding a new job to solve the problem of being unemployed.
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, focusing on
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can divert some of our negative emotions
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as a feeling of bad luck or guilt into more positive emotions
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as feelings of empowerment in our ability to solve our problems. In conclusion, I believe both sides of the argument have merits.
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, I believe it’s better to focus on finding
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because it increases the likelihood of solving our problems and maintaining a positive mental attitude, which is far more important than the benefits of avoiding stress through being accepting of our
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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