Many cities have become less pleasant places to live in recent years. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Nowadays, many people claim that living in a chaotic
city
has become a nightmare. There are a lot of reasons to believe that exist fewer pleasant cities
to live in all around the world. In this
essay I will argue the causes and also
I would give solutions to this
enormous problem.
First
of all, it is true to say that there are different causes that can affect the perspective of a person living in that city
. For example
, in my opinion
the main cause of the population does not want to live in these Add a comma
,opinion
cities
is because of the criminality rate. There are many cities
like mine La Paz -Bolivia, which is considered one of the most dangerous places in Latin America because of all robberies that occur at night. Apart from that, another cause could be bad disposal of garbage
, which in consequence is starting to smell. Clearly, these actions
can affect the thinking of the citizens.
Fortunately, these actions
like criminality rate and the bad disposal of garbage
can be solutional in order to create a better city
to live.
From my perspective, the government can implement more light poles all over around in the Change preposition
in.
city
, so this
can increment the feeling of safety when one is walking at night. On the other hand
, bad disposal of garbage
can also
be easily solucionated. The community should have a habit of recycling, in other words
, separate different types of garbage
into different containers. To sum up, little actions
and small solutions can increase the possibility of people wanting to live in these cities
.
In conclusion, I showed that every city
has its disadvantages but with attitude and small actions
it is possible to become an unpleasant city
into a pleasant city
to live in.Submitted by rolitrauma on
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