Title: More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks

There are a growing number of students studying abroad in both college and university education. I believe experiences gained and

language

improvement

are

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the major advantages but the money spent and family connection might be the negative impacts of

this

scenario.

However

, I personally view that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks which will be discussed in

this

essay.

To begin

with ,students getting their education abroad are able to gain many experiences

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many perspectives. They are exposed to people from different backgrounds and beliefs.

Moreover

, they learn how to adjust themselves to their new environments.

For example

, my friend since kindergarten who was sent to Australia for her undergraduate degree had told me about her having many foreign friends and how challenging life is to live on her own.I perceived

this

opportunity as a valuable life experience one could have in their lifetime.

Secondly

, those living abroad are able to speak the

language

more fluently. While studying in a foreign land, it is undeniable that the country's native

language

is vital to everyday life. Individuals ,based on the situation, can not help but use a foreign

language

.

For instance

, when going to the market, if you want to know the price and types of food you are getting, you need to converse

to

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the locals.

Thus

,

local

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language

is absorbed and you are getting not only better but

also

feel more comfortable using the

language

.

However

, studying abroad could cause a huge amount of money. There are additional costs when compared to studying in your home country.

For example

, accommodation fees, flight tickets and many more.

Also

, being away from home might distance

family's

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members. They might feel lonely and might not be able to contact each other.

This

could lead to

loss

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of connection. If they haven't talked to each other for long, they might not feel close and start to distant. In conclusion, there are negative consequences of getting an education abroad namely lots of investment and family estrangement. The positive outcomes still outweigh the negatives since they gain their

lifetime

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experiences and

language

fluency.