Write a letter to the train company’s head office. In your letter,  give the details of your journey, including the date, time and where you sat  explain the problems that happened and express your dissatisfaction  ask about what action will be taken to improve the service

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction with the management of Railway Station. Recently, I travelled from Chandigarh to Goa via Expressway which I booked online in the month of February and my train was on the 27th of July. I always preferred to book in advance to avoid any issues with the waiting list.
However
, when I reached the station on a given date
then
I found, that my name was not on the list. I was super disappointed and I tried to enquire from the ticket counter but they didn't give me any valid reason.
Instead
, they were putting blame on me, that I should get it double-checked before coming and so on. I faced a big issue due to the cancellation of my seat, and I had to cancel my business meeting on short notice.
Moreover
, my company was not happy with me at that point and in fact, they cancelled all my future meetings. I felt so ashamed only because of the poor management of your department. To void
this
problem I want to suggest
a
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software to manage all passenger bookings, which can help your staff in checking all the details in less than a minute. I do not want
this
same inconvenience with someone else. I hope you find
this
letter on a positive note and take an immediate action Yours Sincerely, Shikha
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