Some people think that developing countries need financial help from international organisations. Others think that it is practical aid and advice that is needed. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Today, many developing
countries
are struggling with higher inflation rates and struggling to fulfil their basic needs.
Although
it is important for developed
countries
to
support
them, they should have a clear idea of whether the financial
support
put into the right projects and there are no financial frauds are happening in between.
This
essay will discuss when international institutions should provide financial help and why it is important to help them on a project basis and sharing knowledge could be the best way to
support
them. Today, many
countries
are struggling with
the
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higher inflation rates.
Although
it is vital to have financial
support
from developed
countries
, they need to ensure their aid
been
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used in the right projects. Since it is hard to audit donated funds, some feel developed
countries
should help them only
be
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sharing their knowledge or by helping them
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much needed
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projects.
This
essay will discuss when they should
support
with financial
aids
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and why they should look into other options if a country is not in a desperate situation.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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