You have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that was booked by the organiser of a company meeting. Write a letter to the organiser of the meeting and include • Details about the meeting • The problem you face • What should be done

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing today with regards to the problems that we had faced while attending our company's meet with the foreign delegates which was organised by your company at the hotel Taj in Chandigarh on 22nd August. As the event was a full-day programme wherein the higher officials of all the renowned companies of the world were joining for a fresh business tie-up.

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attending it. The main purpose of

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meeting was to explore new business opportunities as well as to make new business relations.

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, during the whole function, a lot of inconveniences were faced by us. To name a few, there was a huge network issue in that area,

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, mobile internet as well as, Wifi was not working properly.

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, we were not able to complete our presentation on time causing a huge reputation loss to our esteemed organization.

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,the quality of food served was very poor. Everyone hated the food. Since

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act and incident causes a huge reputational as well as monetary loss to our firm, you are requested to provide a refund of the amount paid because as per the agreement a person can demand a refund in case of deficiency on the part of the service provider. Hope to see an early resolution. Yours faithfully, Katherine.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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In the future, more people will choose to go on holidays in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday? Do you ageree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience

In some places old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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