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As countries have developed there has been a trend towards smaller family sizes. Why does this happen? How does this affect society?

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In recent years, smaller family sizes have become more common all over the world, particularly in the developed world. There are various reasons for
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 exerts many effects on
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 with, the main reason is economic conditions. To bring children up costs so much, especially in developed areas. There are many costs that must be paid.
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, numerous women are more likely to
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 outside
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 of staying at home and doing the household chores. For
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 reason, both parents
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 to earn money for their living. Sometimes they must go to
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 to earn extra income. They often go out and
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 resulting in limited time in child care.
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, in Vietnam, the cost of study from primary to undergraduate school is lower compared to other countries.
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, the tuition fee is affordable for manifold people, especially for people who are on average salary.
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 trend can impact
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 in various ways. Smaller family sizes result in a decrease in population. In
positive
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 manner, individuals have more opportunities to obtain jobs and earn more money.
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, parents can provide better education which will benefit
society
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, The environment will have improved, reduced carbon and nitrogen emissions, reduced pollution and reforestation.
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, the decrease in population will lead to fewer young people in the workforce in the future.
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, the sustainability of future economic growth is less certain. In conclusion, in the future,
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 trend towards smaller family sizes will spread more widely and exert both positive and negative impacts on
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