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some people believe that children should learn how to cook and prepare food in their lessons. what is your opinion about that.

#people #children #cook #food #lessons
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people
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 that young boys and girls should be
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taught
tought
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taught
 in school about cooking and making
food
 in their classes.In my
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opinion
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opinion
oponion
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i
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 think it is
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a great
great
agreat
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a great
 idea
firstly
,teaching
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children
childern
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children
 cooking and preparing
food
 is a good way to make them able to depend on themselves,
also
 it enables them to help their mothers who are working all
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apply
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day doing
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housework
houseworks
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housework
. when
i
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I
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 was a child my teacher always gave me a lesson per week regarding kitchen and how to make simple meals and
i
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 was very happy attending that lesson,so
i
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 spend hours practising at home and it was a great experience.when
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children
childern
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children
 learn how to cook they become more helpful,social and
self confident
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.It
also
 helps them to have a healthier life and decrease the rate of diseases resulting from
food
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poisoning
poisining
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poisoning
.
on the other hand
,some
people
 think that there is no need of teaching
youngs
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young
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 cooking in their school as in modern life it is not a great issue as it can be easily learned and depends on the kid's interest.
people
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also
aslo
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also
 believe that lessons should be given to girls only as boys will not benefit from it.
therefore
 they are
more
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many other
import
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important
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 things that young
people
 can learn
such
 as :how to use
internet
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the internet
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 and how to discover and
develope
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develop
childern's
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children's
 interests In conclusion,many
people
 think that young boys and girls should be
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taught
tought
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taught
 in school about cooking and making
food
 while other think there is no need
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 it.it depends mainly on the kids if they are interested or not.
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