You have recently visited a city on vacation and stayed in a hotel. Write a letter to the manager about your stay. In your letter: Give details of your stay What were the high & low points of the hotel What are your suggestions; recommendations and / or complaints about hotel

Dear Sir, I am writing in regard to provide my recent visit to your hotel from 15th -25th July 2022. I appreciate the services provided by your resort ,
Meanwhile
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I would like to draw your attention to some areas that require improvement.
To begin
with, Our family enjoyed our vacation in your motel very much. The food is awesome, especially the butter chicken masala is mouth-watering. The rooms were spacious and hygienic and the
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ambience,but the pool area was found to be unclean, with lots of fungus patches at the corners of the pool.
Lastly
, the room service staff isn't prompt and unresponsive over the phone. In the line, I would request you take necessary action to mitigate above mention issue.
Moreover
, I suggest you please include the kid's play area
also
, as they feel entertained. hoping these services are improved and maintained when we again visit your resort. Your Faithfully, Parvez Qureshi
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