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You have recently visited a city on vacation and stayed in a hotel. Write a letter to the manager about your stay. In your letter: Give details of your stay What were the high & low points of the hotel What are your suggestions; recommendations and / or complaints about hotel

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Dear Sir, I am writing in regard to provide my recent visit to your hotel from 15th -25th July 2022. I appreciate the services provided by your resort ,
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 I would like to draw your attention to some areas that require improvement.
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 with, Our family enjoyed our vacation in your motel very much. The food is awesome, especially the butter chicken masala is mouth-watering. The rooms were spacious and hygienic and the
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 ambience,but the pool area was found to be unclean, with lots of fungus patches at the corners of the pool.
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, the room service staff isn't prompt and unresponsive over the phone. In the line, I would request you take necessary action to mitigate above mention issue.
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, I suggest you please include the kid's play area
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, as they feel entertained. hoping these services are improved and maintained when we again visit your resort. Your Faithfully, Parvez Qureshi

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  • I stayed at your hotel for three nights last week.
  • I visited the city on vacation with my family.
  • The best part of my stay was the helpful staff.
  • My room was clean, bright, and comfortable.
  • The hotel is in a very good location.
  • Breakfast was fresh and had many choices.
  • One problem was the loud noise at night.
  • The Wi-Fi was very slow and often stopped working.
  • The air conditioning did not work well.
  • The bathroom was not as clean as I expected.
  • I would like to make a small complaint.
  • I suggest that you check the rooms more carefully.
  • It would be better if the hotel improved room service.
  • I hope you can look into this matter.
  • I look forward to your reply.
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