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Nowadays many people want to buy famous brands of clothes, car and other items. what are the reasons for this ? do you think it is positive or negative development ?

#people #brands #clothes #car #items #development
It is undeniable fact that
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people
 are spending much on goods
such
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card
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 and other items. The main reason is that
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 the quality of
product
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 and to
showoff
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 to
people
purchase
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who purchase
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 these kinds of items.
However
 , I personally believe that it is negative development as it directly
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on
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the
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society
. The
first
 and foremost reason is that, owing to
quality
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 of
products
maily
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mainly
 these
company
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 have goodwill in
market
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 and they guarantee the
products
 so
people
 are more inclined to buy these types of
products
. To quote
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and
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the
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spark shoes are more durable and comfortable
compare
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 to
other brand
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another brand
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, as well as
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 give good services
for
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 their customers . Another reason to support my ideology is that
,
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the branded
products
 show the
person
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 wealth and status in
the
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society
such
 as those who drive
mercedes
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shows
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wealthy
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 in
society
. On the other side, when
people
 buy costly
products
 it
lead
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 to
the
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 financial burden .
Moreover
, when it comes to shopping , one should search the
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products
produts
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products
on
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 other outlets .
Foe
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Nowadays
Noadays
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nowadays
 many companies sell better
products
in
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 less price
such
 as Nike , Reebok and Puma .
In addition
 to that, they use recycle
products
 and it
lead
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 to
the
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environment
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 benefits . So
people
 should think twice before purchasing any
products
. On
the
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close scrutiny,
people
 are more
encourage
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 to buy costly
products
 to show off to
society
 , and I believe that
people
spending
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 more on these
products
 which
have
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 detrimental effects on
people
 and
society
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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