Some people think that young people should follow traditions of the society, while other people think that young people should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A bunch of pupils believe that youngsters ought to go after the culture of the community,
on the
contrary
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some people claim that juveniles must be at liberty to act as single. Before giving my opinion I would like to look after both points. Discussing the foremost view, the
foremor
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foremost
former
one is that,
customs
bind
teenager
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with the aura and identity of the society. It will uphold, the social connection.
Furthermore
, in order to preserve
heritage
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it is mandatory to follow them. If children do not adopt their cultural knowledge after a matter of
time
it will fade and get extinct in
this
modern era.
Additionally
, an adaptation of traditional values teaches us to respect our elders which ultimately leads to a better bond between families and
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also
enhance
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the growth of civilization. Analyzing the other view, in
this
period of
time
every person has
freedom
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and the right to do whatever they like.
This
is because if they have their own choices they can be more creative.
On the other hand
, some religious myths are better if they change or can be avoided. To illustrate
this
, in previous
time
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women
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womens
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women
were forced to marry at
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in
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early age and were stopped from
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the study
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further
. After a certain, age they have to do only household chores. But now as the
time
is changing people are neglecting
this
kind of
customs
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and women are living their life on their own terms.
This
is a major
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of the development of the country. To conclude, in my
opinion
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to follow
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customs
in order to
the
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inheritance of traditions from older to younger is very important. But
also
living life on own terms is
also
essential. So I believe
customs
ought to be followed but they should not be forced on the youngster and not be an obstacle to the growth of younger ones.
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