The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984.

The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984.
The given chart indicates how different the
age
structure is in terms of the population in two nations, France and India in 1984.
Overall
, in both countries, the population decreased as people got older. In detail, in France, people who are between the ages of 0 and 40 accounted for 3 to over 4 per cent of the population of both sex,
while
the public who are from the
age
of 40 to 65 stood at 2.5 to 3 per cent.
Moreover
, the proportion of them between 56 and 85 occupied just over 0 to less than 2. In India, people between the
age
of 0 and 5 took up close to 7 per cent and it is the largest rate of all rates. the public between 5 and 25 comprised 4 to 7, as they get older than before. The percentage of them
25
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to 70
had a steady drop from 4 to 1,
whereas
increased at the
age
of over 70.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • charts
  • age structure
  • populations
  • France
  • India
  • 1984
  • overall
  • different
  • evenly distributed
  • proportion
  • young people
  • elderly individuals
  • largest age group
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