In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
It is often
being
told to Unnecessary verb
apply
children
that effort is key to achieving anything. In this
essay
both pros and cons of ingraining Add a comma
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such
mindset
into Correct article usage
a mindset
younger
generation will be thoroughly discussed.
It is beneficial to promote diligence among Correct article usage
the younger
children
, because as a
result
the younger generation gains self-confidence, resulting Add a comma
,result
into
motivation to achieve goals. Change preposition
in
In other words
, positive
attitude and belief in oneself Correct article usage
a positive
is
essential for hard work and accomplishing goals. Correct subject-verb agreement
are
For instance
, several conducted social surveys demonstrate that ambitious children
tend to perform better academically and Add a hyphen
career-wise
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in career
career
wise, meanwhile youngsters without confidence tend to despair, not finish started earlier projects or quit everything due to Fix the agreement mistake
careers
lack
of Correct article usage
a lack
believing
in themselves.
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belief
Drawback
of Add an article
The drawback
A drawback
such
a mindset can result
into
the child being overwhelmed by the pressure of consistently doing their best. Change preposition
in
Therefore
, accumulated stress can result
into
the younger ones giving up too early and realizing that they cannot meet these established high expectations. Change preposition
in
For example
, it is common from a psychological family analysis that abusive parents tend to ignore the real capabilities and physical boundaries of their children
, set up unrealistic expectations in work ethics and pressure little ones to comply, resulting into
significant psychological traumas and Change preposition
in
Add a hyphen
stress-related
stress related
issues in early childhood.
To summarize, advocating Add a hyphen
stress-related
idea
of anything is achievable through enormous effort among Add an article
the idea
younger
generation can have both positive and negative effects Correct article usage
the younger
consequently
. Advantages
of Correct article usage
The advantages
this
view include gaining self-confidence and motivation, although
disadvantages suggest that this
fierce propaganda can result
into
significant stress and traumatic responses.Change preposition
in
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...