Increase the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution. Is there another way?

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Above all, pollution and,
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, growing
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are the most important problems happening nowadays in any city. We all have lived the consequences of those problems in one way or another.
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, we are
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seriously
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seriously
facing climate change, which is made main petrol. Another example is the
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that we go through every day wasting a lot of time. There are many solutions to resolve
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situation
such
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as
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increase
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increasing
the
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of
pretrol
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petrol
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the
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of public
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transport
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transport
,
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the
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of certain
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which have already been used enough, etc. In the
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text, we are going to assess whether increasing the
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of petrol is a good idea to stop the growth of
traffic
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and pollution or it is not the best.
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, we must agree with the fact that if the
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of
gas
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increase
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, fewer people are going to
use
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private
vehicles
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;
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, if it
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happens
, the demand
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public
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transport
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transport
would increase. So, we can be sure
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that
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would work.
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, it would
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not
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no
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be the best solution as the public
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are not
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appropriate
because Peru does not have a competent
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infrastructure
infraestructure
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infrastructure
. The other solution which I consider more
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appropriate
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appropriate
is not increasing the prices
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but promoting and upgrading the public service.
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, the
use
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of it would be based on the own people's
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initiative
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initiative
and, in the same way, not
a
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increase
of
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price
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. Concluding, Reducing people's petrol consumption by increasing prices is not the best solution
for
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pollution and
traffic
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growing
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.
Consecuently
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, it is better to upgrade the public
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and
service
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services
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because that would promote the demand
of
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it
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them
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, and, above all,
this
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investment would try to reach a world without global warming and horrible
traffic
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • discourage
  • incentivize
  • environmentally friendly
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • pollutants
  • alternative energy sources
  • sustainable economy
  • disproportionately affect
  • daily commuting
  • infrastructure
  • urban planning
  • comprehensive solutions
  • public transportation systems
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