You recently Stayed at your friends Place to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. write a letter to feed friend In your letter you should : • Describe what the accident was • explain when it happened • Suggest how the damage can be fixed

Dear Ravi, I hope

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letter finds you well. I regret to write

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letter to inform you about an accident which happened without any intention.

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, I knew that you love to watch movies on your's

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despite your busy schedule at the workplace, but unfortunately, the

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was broken into two pieces while cleaning the house. As you heard, I decided to clean the house as I felt very bad looking at all rooms.

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, the kitchen was really disgusting with the bad smell,

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, I started cleaning the house right from the leaving room, where I hit the

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very hardly with a stick and it got into two pieces and I was in shock for a while and still I do hear the noise in my dream too. Undoubtedly, the damage cannot be incalculable considering your's love and passion for the

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, we have some experts who can fix the

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in an immaculate way and I am sure that later there will not be any issue with it. Just trust me and hand over the

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to me and rest I will take care and deliver the

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in brand new condition. Once again I am expressing my sincere apologies for the inconvenience caused Best Regards, Lakshmi.

lakshma999Mon Aug 29 2022

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