You recently Stayed at your friends Place to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. write a letter to feed friend In your letter you should : • Describe what the accident was • explain when it happened • Suggest how the damage can be fixed

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Dear Ravi, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I regret to write

this

letter to inform you about an accident which happened without any intention.

Firstly

, I knew that you love to watch movies on your's

despite your busy schedule at the workplace, but unfortunately, the

was broken into two pieces while cleaning the house. As you heard, I decided to clean the house as I felt very bad looking at all rooms.

In addition

, the kitchen was really disgusting with the bad smell,

Hence

, I started cleaning the house right from the leaving room, where I hit the

very hardly with a stick and it got into two pieces and I was in shock for a while and still I do hear the noise in my dream too. Undoubtedly, the damage cannot be incalculable considering your's love and passion for the

However

, we have some experts who can fix the

in an immaculate way and I am sure that later there will not be any issue with it. Just trust me and hand over the

to me and rest I will take care and deliver the

in brand new condition. Once again I am expressing my sincere apologies for the inconvenience caused Best Regards, Lakshmi.

Submitted by lakshma999 on Mon Aug 29 2022

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7 paragraphs

214 words

9.00

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