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The advent of internet has made it possible for people to work from home. Write an essay looking at the advantages and disadvantages of this professional arrangements. Share personal examples in your essay

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Recently, the world was hit by a pandemic which made us realise that many professionals can
work
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 from home
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 of going to crowded offices.
This
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 trend has both advantages and disadvantages to the workers and Employer.
Firstly
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,the employees during the pandemic were the most vulnerable group of individuals as they were working in closed places within
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crowded
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. Due to
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,the companies started to give the privilege to
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 from their houses which reduces the risk of getting infected.
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, the workers felt safe and
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 simultaneously do their job. The main reason behind working at home was the discovery of the
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. The
internet
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 made it easy to call or Vedic chat with anyone around the world. To illustrate, if the one working at
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home can discuss with all the colleagues on the zoom application, in which all the members are in a single call. It
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 has an option to see participants on live cameras.
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, it
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 has some demerits, the employer will compel their employees to
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 with no time boundaries.
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, the workers can not take leave because
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 they can
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 even lying down on the bed.
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, sometimes employees get disconnected if the
internet
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 service is of poor quality. To exemplify, the
internet
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 companies
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 as BSNL or Jio have
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less reaching capacity in rural areas,
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 individuals working from rural areas find it difficult to complete their
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. To sum up, the modern inventions of the
internet
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 have made life easier but even
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, they cannot replace the natural working environment. It depends on the personal opinion to like or dislike
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 new life.

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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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