Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?
Well-being is a principal aspect of being happy for many
people
. These days, people
are living consumerist life
and having significant
amount of wealth allows them to possess Add an article
a significant
astronomical
Add an article
the astronomical
an astronomical
amount
of materialized Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
things
because this
makes them happy. There are some other factors which humans ignore to consider for happy
lifestyle Correct article usage
a happy
such
as contended lifestyle. In this
essay, I will discuss above mentioned
facets in detail with relevant examples.
Having Add a hyphen
above-mentioned
enormous
Correct article usage
an enormous
amount
in bank balance makes Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
people
delightful
because they can use Replace the word
delighted
this
money
to buy their dreams and acquire more and more possessions for their satisfactory
. Replace the word
satisfaction
For instance
, humans’
tendency to buy new Change noun form
humans
things
for enjoyment and fun in the
Correct article usage
apply
life
so, whoever
Correct word choice
so whoever
have
more Change the verb form
has
money
, they
can buy more Correct pronoun usage
apply
things
, especially more
expensive than usual Correct pronoun usage
those more
such
as branded shoes or shoes. As a result
, they delight when they possess the things
that they wish to have.
Other than obtaining material
by spending Fix the agreement mistake
materials
money
, there are many other ways people
can be happy in their life
. Satisfaction is vital
attitude to being joyful in Add an article
a vital
the vital
the
Correct article usage
apply
life
rather than being greedy despite the fact that they have a load of money
. For example
, a recent study on 100 employees from the
various field shows that those Correct article usage
apply
Correct pronoun usage
who are
are contended
with their salary, Change to the active voice
contend
have contended
they
are more likely to be happy at work and at home with their families. Correct pronoun usage
apply
This
example clears us that there are other factors can
Correct pronoun usage
that can
also
be the reason to be happy other than wealth.
In conclusion, although
money
can buy many things
what
we consider having for Correct word choice
that
better
and happy Correct article usage
a better
Correct your spelling
lifestyle
life style
, we should not ignore the satisfaction aspect to be cheerful in Correct your spelling
lifestyle
life
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