Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?

Well-being is a principal aspect of being happy for many
people
. These days,
people
are living consumerist
life
and having
significant
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amount of wealth allows them to possess
astronomical
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the astronomical
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amount
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of materialized
things
because
this
makes them happy. There are some other factors which humans ignore to consider for
happy
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a happy
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lifestyle
such
as contended lifestyle. In
this
essay, I will discuss
above mentioned
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facets in detail with relevant examples. Having
enormous
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amount
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amounts
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in bank balance makes
people
delightful
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because they can use
this
money
to buy their dreams and acquire more and more possessions for their
satisfactory
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satisfaction
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.
For instance
,
humans’
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humans
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tendency to buy new
things
for enjoyment and fun in
the
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life
so,
whoever
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so whoever
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have
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more
money
,
they
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apply
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can buy more
things
, especially
more
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those more
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expensive than usual
such
as branded shoes or shoes.
As a result
, they delight when they possess the
things
that they wish to have. Other than obtaining
material
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materials
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by spending
money
, there are many other ways
people
can be happy in their
life
. Satisfaction is
vital
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a vital
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attitude to being joyful in
the
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life
rather than being greedy despite the fact that they have a load of
money
.
For example
, a recent study on 100 employees from
the
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various field shows that those
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who are
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are contended
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contend
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with their salary,
they
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apply
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are more likely to be happy at work and at home with their families.
This
example clears us that there are other factors
can
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also
be the reason to be happy other than wealth. In conclusion,
although
money
can buy many
things
what
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that
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we consider having for
better
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a better
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and happy
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lifestyle
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life style
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lifestyle
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, we should not ignore the satisfaction aspect to be cheerful in
life
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Financial security
  • Basic needs
  • Comfort
  • Luxury
  • Freedom
  • Altruistic
  • Philanthropy
  • Nurturing relationships
  • Fulfillment
  • Sense of accomplishment
  • Physical well-being
  • Spiritual beliefs
  • Community involvement
  • Gratitude
  • Mindfulness
  • Simple pleasures
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