Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In today’s modern society, many industrial activities bring a wide

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of environmental

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to our

Earth

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. On many forums, some think that the extinction of

species

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of plants and animals is the primary issue of our time.

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, many

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think that

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the loss of many

species

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, there

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exist

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a

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of other paramount environmental

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. Personally, I think one of the most vital issues, which we have to deal with, is the extinction of these animals and plants.

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of all, our

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have

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to face up with many

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environmental

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not only the loss of particular

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but

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other critical

problems

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. The rising

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sea level, global warming,

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melting of

permafrosts

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permafrost

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,…,

for example

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, are the consequences of

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climate change, one of the most important issues of our time. As we have known before, the more carbon dioxide

emit

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into our atmosphere, the more disasters we have to deal with in the future.

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that, many activities from the factory

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contribute

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a wide

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of CO2 and make our atmosphere become worse than ever.

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, today, many natural disasters happen more often in our

life

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and the frequency

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unpredictable,

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problem caused a lot of damage to

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's property and many

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can die because of these disasters.

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, the extinction of many

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is

also

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the main environmental

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problems

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that we must take care of so that there are no serious consequences later. Because these

species

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are the most vital sources of our life, edible plants,

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, provide

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human

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wide

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of food.

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that, it is essential for our atmosphere because it is

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important tool which is used to exchange

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carbon dioxide. Another reason is that the more

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exist in the world, the more vegetation

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our

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and it contributes

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our biodiversity. From

viewpoint

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, I strongly believe that more and more

species

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can have a

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positive

possitive

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positive

effect not only

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us but

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for

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our

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. It can be the main factor which has

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enormous impact on the

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maintenance

maintance

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maintenance

and

decreasing

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of the ecological imbalance in the

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species’s

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diversity. In conclusion, albeit there are many

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environmental

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which

people

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have to deal with in the future, the loss of many

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both the fauna and flora is the most important

issues

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issue

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which

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have to solve immediately. Because it is the basic problem if

people

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want to save and reduce the consequences of climate change.