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Some parents believe children's leisure activities should be always educational, but others think it will cause more pressure on children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In
this
 era,
parents
 care
about
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 their
children
's
education
 than ever. There's no doubt that
parents
 are trying to engage in
education
 whatever their offspring are doing while some say that it will cause more pressure on
children
. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion. On the one hand, I strongly argue that
children
's leisure activities should always be educational. It is true that as they play,
children
 will learn more and they will be interested in learning.
For example
, when a child is learning to add, they will be more interested if you show them how to add with candies or with leaves while
children
 play in the park
instead
 of forcing them to sit at the table with a book.
On the other hand
, I suggest that
this
 will take a toll on
children
's mental health. If
parents
 force their heir to learn too much,
children
 will get bored and if
parents
 still force them to study, it will cause pressure on
children
. For
an
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instant, a child will get bored and may be pressured if even when at the playground, his or her mom wants him/her to subtract the birds which he/she has done too much of it at home. In conclusion, both aspects have their pros and cons but I suggest that
education
 is very critical and if can,
parents
 should engage in
education
 anytime.
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