Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter: * suggest how you could help her in her home * say why you would like to do this work * explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barrett, My name is Alice Sparks and I am writing

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letter because I am interested in helping you out at home during the summer. In your advertisement, you mentioned that you were looking for someone who can tend to your backyard and help with the cooking and dishes. I have had part-time jobs before doing both of these activities so I have considerable knowledge and experience that might be useful. I am currently a student, completing my

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in the university and looking for part-time work for the summer. Your house is only a few blocks away from my place, so commute will

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not be an issue.

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, I cook and tend to the garden at my home in my leisure time as well, so

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is a convenient job for me. I am

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interning with one of my professors during the summer, so I will be unavailable from 11 AM to 4 PM on weekdays.

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, I have Networking classes in the evening on Monday, Wednesday and Friday from 6 PM to 7 PM.

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, my schedule is free at the weekends. You can reach me at +91-872600000 and we can discuss

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. Looking forward to hearing from you. Regards, Alice

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

208 words

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