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Nowadays, young people communicate with friends and family mostily through social networking sites, rather than other ways of communication like talking on the phone or face to face. Do you think this is a positve or negative development.

#people #friends #sites #communication #phone #face #positve #development
Recently youngsters have created a new
friend
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friends
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 in the field of
communication
 by using social media
palatform
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platform
platforms
.
This
, lead to
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a fall
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fall
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 in
tele-
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telecommunication
telecommunications
communication
 and
also
 talking face to face as in
olden
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 days.
However
,
this
 current development has both merits and demerits, but as far as I am concerned, the advantages out weight the disadvantage.
To begin
 with,
discovery
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the discovery
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 of
internet
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the internet
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 has changed human life
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too
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to
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so
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 much that without
which
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it
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 we have
find
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 it very difficult to survive. communicating with friends and faraway
relative
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relatives
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 has become easier than it used to be, after the invention of social networking. To illustrate,
instagram
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Instagram
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,
snapchat
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Snapchat
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,
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Twitter
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twitter
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and twitter
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 are the trending websites mostly used by teenagers to chat and call their pals.
Furthermore
, these websites do not charge extra for overseas
call
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calls
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 and
also
 one can send or
receieve
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receive
vedios
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videos
 and photos free of cost. Anyhow,
this
 new
communication
 technology has improved
the
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relationships by getting in touch with all the old friends and far relatives.
However
, in
this
 busy world, the adults and younger generation do not get time to meet friends in person but, they can be in contact and know about
others
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others'
other's
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 life easily with the help of
communication
 networking sites.
In addition
,
the
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telephones and mobile phones are a bit costlier in case of communicating with family in a different country which has led to the decline of
this
 mode of
communication
. To summarise, modern inventions have made life easier and
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less complex
lesscomplex
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less complex
 and
internet
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the internet
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 and social network
is
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are
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 one of them.
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Even though
Eventhough
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Even though
 it has some
drawback
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drawbacks
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,the
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benefits
benifits
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benefits
 are way more.
Hence
, I consider
this
technology
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technological
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 development
as
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a positive trend.
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