Some parents think that helping their children with homework is a good idea. Others believe children should do their homework on their own. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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will discuss both views and will give my opinion .

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

parental involvement
collaborative learning
academic progress
dependency
problem-solving skills
self-reliance
critical thinking
facilitators
moderation
enhancing understanding
sense of accomplishment
independent learning

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Some parents think that helping their children with homework is a good idea. Others believe children should do their homework on their own. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

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