Some parents think that helping their children with homework is a good idea. Others believe children should do their homework on their own. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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, a small portion of parents believe that helping their child to complete their homework is beneficial for them
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other parents
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children
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will discuss both views and will give my opinion .
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doing
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home
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work
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themselves will help
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to increase their concentration
towards
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work
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they are doing.
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will help them to utilize their intelligence.
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can
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easily
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find out the answer
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task given during
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class time.
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, it can encourage them to find answers. Opposite to
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hands of parents
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the
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task for
children
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discourage them to do activities. It
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them
more
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lazy. For
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examaple
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children
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children
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will get
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, I believe that it will
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better for the
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to do their
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home tasks
given by teachers by themselves which can promote them to achieve
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • parental involvement
  • collaborative learning
  • academic progress
  • dependency
  • problem-solving skills
  • self-reliance
  • critical thinking
  • facilitators
  • moderation
  • enhancing understanding
  • sense of accomplishment
  • independent learning
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