in their advertising, nowadays businesses usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. why is this? do you think it is a positive or negative development?

these days, most companies benefit from advertising in order to absorb customers' attention. one of the key factors in ads is to assert
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of a commodity which is new. there are several reasons that lead advertisers to use
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method. in my opinion, it can be
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both positive and negative development in some ways. many commentators justifiably argue that there are a lot of causes that make producers emphasise the novelty of their goods.
firstly
, they are able to show their superiority compared
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their rivals.
consequently
, they are more likely to convince customers to purchase their products.
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, as people prefer to try new things so as to increase their well-being, asserting
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distinctive aspects of commodities may satisfy individuals’
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for instance
, when a woman watches an advertisement about a new version of
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cleaner that shows the ability
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spots automatically, they are encouraged to buy it. while if they do not aware of
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feature, they are less likely to order it.
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positive and negative progress simultaneously. on the one hand, having to show a new aspect of goods makes businesses improve their technology.
in other words
, they are more likely to invent new things.
as a result
, people's lives will become easier and there their welfare would increase.
on the other hand
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advertisers deceive clients with false claims. a beautiful club in the US,
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, introduced a new method of skin therapy a few years ago. many celebrities used it at high prices, but later it turned out that they only used starch which was not new or expensive. in conclusion, stressing
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new attributes of a product has become ordinary in
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market due to the reasons mentioned above.
However
, I personally believe that it can have affirmative and adverse effects on our lives so people should be aware of those impacts.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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