Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local businesses will bring about the death of local communities. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In recent times, many countries are building large shopping

centers

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to cater

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needs of the people,

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a move to prove the

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socio-economic

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improvements

imrpovements

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improvements

.

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, others think that

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development will lead to

closure

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of small businesses and later on leave the community members suffering. I

stronly

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strongly

agree that the bankruptcy of small, local entrepreneurs

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have a negative great impact not only

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people's financial status

,

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but

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,

losing

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local tradition. Capitalization is a major game in our modern world. Those who have good financial resources can easily start up a business by funding

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constructions

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of buildings and employing a number of workers. Due to

many

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varities

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varieties

of large shopping

store

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, people tend to go there to buy their needs.

However

, local

shop

owners usually have

limited

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budget to keep the

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business

bussiness

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business

going.

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small gift

shop

for

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example, the owners can only sell limited items since the capital is small. If shoppers will continue to ignore the local shops, no income will come in and the

shop

will be forced to close adding the

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owner

ownner

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to the long toll of jobless individuals.

In addition

, the local shops are usually selling novelty items related to the heritage of the

the

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community. It is a good way to

preseve

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preserve

the culture so

younger

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the younger

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generation can learn old skills.

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, closure of a store, selling hand-made hats which

uses

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local materials. The children will not be able to learn how to

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weave to create those hats;

instead

, they will just buy

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ready made

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headwear

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head wear

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. They will not be aware of what

they

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place is known for. In conclusion,

although

buildings and huge commercial establishments are signs of

improvements

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in a country,

it

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also

result

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to

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a loss of livelihood of

a

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local

shop

owners and vanishing old

tradition

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