Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local businesses will bring about the death of local communities. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
In recent times, many countries are building large shopping
centers
to cater Change the spelling
centres
the
needs of the people, Change preposition
for the
this
is considered as
a move to prove the Change preposition
apply
nations
socio-economic Change noun form
nation's
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improvements
imrpovements
. Correct your spelling
improvements
However
, others think that this
development will lead to closure
of small businesses and later on leave the community members suffering. I Add an article
the closure
stronly
agree that the bankruptcy of small, local entrepreneurs Correct your spelling
strongly
do
have a negative great impact not only Correct subject-verb agreement
does
in
people's financial statusChange preposition
on
,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
, losing
local tradition.
Capitalization is a major game in our modern world. Those who have good financial resources can easily start up a business by funding Change preposition
on losing
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the constructions
constructions
of buildings and employing a number of workers. Due to Fix the agreement mistake
construction
many
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the many
varities
of large shopping Correct your spelling
varieties
store
, people tend to go there to buy their needs. Fix the agreement mistake
stores
However
, local shop
owners usually have limited
budget to keep the Add an article
a limited
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business
bussiness
going. Correct your spelling
business
A
small gift Change preposition
In a
shop
for
example, the owners can only sell limited items since the capital is small. If shoppers will continue to ignore the local shops, no income will come in and the Add the comma(s)
,for
shop
will be forced to close adding the Correct your spelling
owner
ownner
to the long toll of jobless individuals.
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more own
In addition
, the local shops are usually selling novelty items related to the heritage of the the
community. It is a good way to Remove the redundancy
apply
preseve
the culture so Correct your spelling
preserve
younger
generation can learn old skills. Add an article
the younger
For instance
, closure of a store, selling hand-made hats which uses
local materials. The children will not be able to learn how to Correct subject-verb agreement
use
do
weave to create those hats; Unnecessary verb
apply
instead
, they will just buy Add a hyphen
ready-made
ready made
Add a hyphen
ready-made
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headwear
head wear
. They will not be aware of what Correct your spelling
headwear
they
place is known for.
In conclusion, Correct pronoun usage
their
although
buildings and huge commercial establishments are signs of improvements
in a country, Fix the agreement mistake
improvement
it
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they
also
result
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results
to
a loss of livelihood of Change preposition
in
a
local Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
shop
owners and vanishing old tradition
.Fix the agreement mistake
traditions
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