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please describe your childfood memory related to your family.

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An old proverb says: "Do not judge a book by its cover".
This
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 means you should not judge
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 - or people - solely by appearance.
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,
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 point might be more valid for people than for
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. Usually,publishers do not want to disguise their
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. Whether it is a detective story, a sword and sorcery story, or literary fiction, they want each book on the shelf to tease and tempt the reader. In many ways, we judge
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 by their covers every day. They just want them to tease and tempt the readers. So, is the cover a reliable representation of the narrative that is inside? Maybe not.
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, it often tells us what kind of story to expect. When I was young, I thought doing dishes
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chores were nightmares. When I was young, I thought doing dishes
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chores were nightmares. It seems trivial now,
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in fact
, I even derive some pleasure from the chore. But when I was a child, I lived in utter terror of being asked to touch that horrible mess in the sink. I resented scrubbing pods. I hated the sensation of touching stray peas and rice in
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greasy
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 water.
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