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overpopulation in many major urban centres around the world is a major problem what are the causes of this ?how can this problem be solved?

#overpopulation #centres #world
It has been observed that more and more
people
 migrate
in
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metropolitan
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the metropolitan
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area
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;
therefore
,
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developed
devloped
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developed
area
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areas
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are became
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 overcrowded. There are several factors and remedies for
such
 an issue. Both the aspects are elaborated
in
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ensuing
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 paragraphs Scrutinizing the cause ,
to begin
 with, big cities became unhealthy for survival.
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words
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people
 migrate
countinisly
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countings
 for
better
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a better
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 lifestyle because
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developed
devloped
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developed
 cities not only give good
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animates
animites
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animals
 but
also
 give well education
for
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 children.
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,
devastation
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 of
green
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 environment
in
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increase
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 pollution. To
elaborced
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elaborate
elaborated
,
high
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 demand
of
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 living place
for instance
 flats,
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bangles
bangloes
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those
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are getting population and congestion it
create
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 difficulty to
breath
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,
as a
result
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,result
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 most
of
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people
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the people
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 are suffering some disease
for example
 asthma, cancer and many more. In
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order
oder
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order
 to improve the
situation
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 some steps can be taken.
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Firstly
First
Fristly
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Firstly
, developing backward
area
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. By
i
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means
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 that
,
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 the government should take action towards undeveloped cities,
for example
, the authority should be improved some
aminities
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amenities
 like water supply,
road way
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roadway
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 and
also
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eduction
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education
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 sector for children despite of
entrepreneus
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entrepreneurs
 be motivated and Commercial sector provide employment and work
oppurtinities
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opportunities
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therefore
people
 do not migrate from one
Place
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 to another place. In conclusion, migration
are
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reducing some greenery and
spread
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 disease; It has to be controlled before
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further
futher
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further
 delay . It is crucial to improve
undeveloped
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the undeveloped
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area
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. A nation can be
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developed
develope
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developed
 when every habitat will be having enough facilities and
basics
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 needs.
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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

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  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

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  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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