International tourism is now more common than even before (except in the times of lock-down during covid 19). Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not. What are your opinions on this?

In recent years, the global

travel

industry is becoming extremely popular with the assistance of social media. Whether

travel

influencers have started a

travel

revolution is becoming a widely debated topic. Despite the fact that some believe these

travel

videos are significantly related to the rise of international

travel

, the majority,

however

, remain

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. In my opinion, the advantages of the

travel

industry

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the disadvantages by far.

First

and foremost,

tourism

is an essential factor to enhance

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local employment and generate a sustainable income for many local families. Businesses in

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tourist destinations need plenty of human resources to maintain excellent services for

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visitors. According to the research conducted by Time magazine, international

tourism

has created millions of job positions, like

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staff and other related occupations in Hong Kong. It is believed

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% of the gross domestic product of Hong Kong is generated by the revenue

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tourism

.

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, trading businesses are deeply benefited by

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international flights, which have greatly increased the number of cargoes being transported from one place to another.

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has encouraged the connection of goods exchange, like fruits and other exotic products. In sum, International

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not only provide a great opportunity for local economic growth

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it

also

establishes a great trading network

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among countries

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among countries

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further

point is that education is another significant advantage

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tourism

brings.

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is a great method to gain

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knowledge of

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the cultures

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and histories

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other countries. Another striking illustration is that recent studies have shown students who had been on a foreign exchange programme are more likely to have a successful career.

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,

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experience can

simulate

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the minds of the young generations and broaden their horizons to a brighter future. In short, having discussed the positive aspects of

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abroad, I contend that the benefits of

tourism

will not only bring

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strong economic growth to society, it will

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young minds to be creative and enrich their experience in life.