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International tourism is now more common than even before (except in the times of lock-down during covid 19). Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not. What are your opinions on this?

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In recent years, the global
travel
 industry is becoming extremely popular with the assistance of social media. Whether
travel
 influencers have started a
travel
 revolution is becoming a widely debated topic. Despite the fact that some believe these
travel
 videos are significantly related to the rise of international
travel
, the majority,
however
, remain
skeptical
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. In my opinion, the advantages of the
travel
 industry
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have
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outweigh
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 the disadvantages by far.
First
 and foremost,
tourism
 is an essential factor to enhance
the
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local employment and generate a sustainable income for many local families. Businesses in
the
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tourist destinations need plenty of human resources to maintain excellent services for
the
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visitors. According to the research conducted by Time magazine, international
tourism
 has created millions of job positions, like
hotels’
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 staff and other related occupations in Hong Kong. It is believed
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% of the gross domestic product of Hong Kong is generated by the revenue
of
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tourism
.
Furthermore
, trading businesses are deeply benefited by
the
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international flights, which have greatly increased the number of cargoes being transported from one place to another.
This
 has encouraged the connection of goods exchange, like fruits and other exotic products. In sum, International
travelers
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 not only provide a great opportunity for local economic growth
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it
also
 establishes a great trading network
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among countries
amongcountries
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among countries
. A
further
 point is that education is another significant advantage
which
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tourism
 brings.
Traveling
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 is a great method to gain
first hand
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 knowledge of
cultures
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the cultures
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 and histories
from
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 other countries. Another striking illustration is that recent studies have shown students who had been on a foreign exchange programme are more likely to have a successful career.
As a result
,
travel
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 experience can
simulate
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 the minds of the young generations and broaden their horizons to a brighter future. In short, having discussed the positive aspects of
traveling
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 abroad, I contend that the benefits of
tourism
 will not only bring
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strong economic growth to society, it will
also
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young minds to be creative and enrich their experience in life.
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