You recently bought a piece of computer equipment but it was broken. You work at home and you need this equipment for your work. Write a letter to the shop manager. In this letter: • describe the problem with the equipment • explain how this problem is affecting your work • say what you would like the shop to do

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Dear Sir, My name is Gurmit Singh.
Last
week, I bought a keyboard for my Dell
computer
from your shop. I am writing
this
letter to inform you that when I open that box unfortunately I found it damage as together as when I tried to connect it to my
computer
it was not working. I would like to tell you that I am a software Engineer
hence
, throughout the day I ought to spend the most time on the
computer
. As you know
this
equipment is a crucial part of the
computer
thus
it is challenging for me to survive without a keyboard,
as a result
, I am unable to complete my task within the working time period. I know you are a reputed firm of our city,
therefore
, I would like to recommend that please change
this
part as soon as possible so that I can continue my work with a delay of time. I will send it to you by tomorrow morning. I hope you will take it seriously. Your Sincerely
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