Art and music are considered some of the fundamental elements of all societies. Do you think art and music still have a place in today's modern world of technology? Should children spend more time learning art and music at school

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are expression and illustration of
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imagination interpreted in terms of drawings, singing,drama, theatre, etc...They play a fundamental part
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life though
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superseded them. I strongly believe that children should spend more time learning
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and
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at school rather
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exposed to
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. Having a childhood without
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, I absolutely believe that
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and
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builds
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many skills
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motor,
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to learn colours,
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of different objects and paintings.
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, singing helps a
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to express himself and definitely helps him to defeat timidity. Unfortunately,
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is bringing much more harm to
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rather than
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. Science has proved that a
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exposed to
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as television has the tendency
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speech delay, lack of concentration, nervosity and even developed obesity. I absolutely believe that
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should be introduced at a later stage of the
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's development. From zero to seven years old, I believe that children should grow up with
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and at a later stage,
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should be
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introduce
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intoduce
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Inadversely
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,
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kills the innocence of
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, some
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might be exposed to harmful videos
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as violence,
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videos. Whereas
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and
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,
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provide security and
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to
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. The government should encourage more contemporary Arts and
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kids
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and it should be compulsory
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children up to 7 years old.
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should be introduced at a later stage of
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development but without eradicating
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and
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in their program of study.
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  • cultural identity
  • cognitive benefits
  • emotional expression
  • mental well-being
  • mindfulness
  • human connection
  • creativity
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  • discipline
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