Art and music are considered some of the fundamental elements of all societies. Do you think art and music still have a place in today's modern world of technology? Should children spend more time learning art and music at school

Art

and

Music

are expression and illustration of

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imagination interpreted in terms of drawings, singing,drama, theatre, etc...They play a fundamental part

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human's

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life though

technology

have

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superseded them. I strongly believe that children should spend more time learning

Art

and

music

at school rather

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exposed to

technology

. Having a childhood without

technology

, I absolutely believe that

Art

and

music

builds

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many skills

such

a

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motor,

ability

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the ability

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to learn colours,

manipulation

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and manipulation

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of different objects and paintings.

Moreover

, singing helps a

child

to express himself and definitely helps him to defeat timidity. Unfortunately,

technology

is bringing much more harm to

kids

rather than

Art

and

Music

. Science has proved that a

child

exposed to

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technology

such

as television has the tendency

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speech delay, lack of concentration, nervosity and even developed obesity. I absolutely believe that

technology

should be introduced at a later stage of the

child

's development. From zero to seven years old, I believe that children should grow up with

Art

and

Music

and at a later stage,

technology

should be

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introduce

introduced

intoduce

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introduced

to them.

Inadversely

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Inadvertently

,

technology

kills the innocence of

kids

, some

kids

might be exposed to harmful videos

such

as violence,

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videos. Whereas

Art

and

Music

,

they

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apply

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provide security and

comforts

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to

kids

. The government should encourage more contemporary Arts and

Music

to

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kids

and it should be compulsory

to

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children up to 7 years old.

Technology

should be introduced at a later stage of

the

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child

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development but without eradicating

art

and

Music

in their program of study.